Improvements on Written Storyboards - Refer to Moving Storyboard for Greater Detail

These are the improvements i have made to my story board, improvements include titles and further explanations;

those that are side by side are in the same shot, for example the camera pans to the right, or zooms in etc. those underneath are the next cross cut. there is one that is at an angle, the reason being that it is all one long shot and would not fit on the scanner completely horizontal